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PoisonTheCure

3 Art Reviews

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Not Bad

I like the fact that you were ambitious enough to draw a topless guy. There is room for improvement but I think you did a good job anyway. :)

mega-supreme responds:

well, you can't learn anything if you just cover up.

Impressive

Yes it is. You know what I really, really like about this picture? Your use of multiple painterly/texture brushes. It gives the picture a grungy and 'bookcover' sort of feel for me. Then there's the robot thingies eyes and the shading xD
Still trying to figure out how you did it. It's lovely, keep up the good work.

Syringes responds:

Aww thank you! I was examining other work a while ago and discovered that backgrounds look a lot more interesting with lots of texture and such, although it wasn't a HUGE success, i still thought it was really neat and not too distracting, but something to look at. I spent a while trying to find some neat texture brushes, hehe. Im glad you liked this! haha. Well, photoshop and a paint brush, took about 3 or 4 days with a 2 day break(Not sure about the hours though). Im just glad I didn't give-up ^^;

Not Bad

Both your anatomy and colouring are decent but I feel you could do better. At least put some effort into her breasts, it's like a slightly bulgy man chest with nipples. The line-art and cell shading is not as smooth and crisp as it could be you could try harder on that. Also, abusing textures is lazy, especially if you don't make it fit the creases :U

Still, a really charming picture. And I like the way you handled the pose.

Debbyorquidea responds:

In this paint i tried to make a style with less textures and few tones of colors.

So... i don't tried make a cell shading rich, shadowns, and this things, i just wanted an art more clean.

And the boobs... in this picture was also an intention that they were small. Thanks for analysis.

But i agree about the creases. I could do more painstaking. ^^

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