Yes.

I love it. Reminds me every story I made as a kid, only witty. The ending was a bit traumatising though, because I visualised it.

Not Bad

I like the fact that you were ambitious enough to draw a topless guy. There is room for improvement but I think you did a good job anyway. :)

Impressive

Yes it is. You know what I really, really like about this picture? Your use of multiple painterly/texture brushes. It gives the picture a grungy and 'bookcover' sort of feel for me. Then there's the robot thingies eyes and the shading xD
Still trying to figure out how you did it. It's lovely, keep up the good work.

Not Bad

Both your anatomy and colouring are decent but I feel you could do better. At least put some effort into her breasts, it's like a slightly bulgy man chest with nipples. The line-art and cell shading is not as smooth and crisp as it could be you could try harder on that. Also, abusing textures is lazy, especially if you don't make it fit the creases :U

Still, a really charming picture. And I like the way you handled the pose.